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The Personification of Spring
 Post subject: Musical Dabbles
PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2012 8:44 pm GMT 
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Hecate suggested I try doing dabbles to improve my writing; here's one I just came up with:

"Vega-Tables"-The Beach Boys

"Eat up, damn it!" Murray demanded his son. Michael was the pickiest eater on the face of the planet, so it was no surprise his peas went untouched in fair of the chicken on his plate. Murray gave a sigh. "Why don't you like vegetables?" he asked desperately, pulling his hair. Michael gave a shrug, pushing the offending food around his plate in circles. "Why do I have to eat them?" he asked his father in a bored tone. "They taste terrible." "They're good for you." his father replied simply, rather annoyed now at his son's constant resistance to him and his logic; why couldn't his kid see his way and just eat the damn things? He heaved another bevy sigh and picked up their plates. 

Here be characters! (More on the way...)
Upson Cage
Lawrence Reynolds
Michael Cezley
Jack Brown
Nick White


 Post subject: Re: Musical Dabbles
PostPosted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 8:11 am GMT 

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Vega-tables sound so funny!
But you have improved your writing as it can be seen in your Dabbles as the storyline looks great!
Good job


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